So this is a much different story than the Jason and Azazel trilogy, and I'm curious as to your thoughts and theories...

I like it so far. I loved the Azazel and Jason story cant wait more on that (hopefully), im still at the beginning of BRIGHTER...i like the mystery of it.

Another awesome couple of chapters...things are really moving...are you going to put this up on Web Fiction Guide when it's done?

Would it be possible to highlight the chapters already posted in a different colour in the table of contents? That would make it easier to remember where I was when I come back to read a new chapter.

A little late for this serial but if you do this sort of thing again something to look into.

I could do something like that, but I've really been trying to keep the amount of work I do to update the site to a minimum. When I was serializing the Jason and Azazel trilogy, each new chapter took me like seven steps to upload, and now I've got it down to two.

What I'd suggest is to subscribe to my updates list (there should be a form in the upper right of each brighter page) and then you'll get a link to each chapter as soon as it's available. Or you can like my facebook page or follow me on twitter. I also post updates there.

http://www.facebook.com/pages/V-J-Chambers/75550165763

http://twitter.com/vjchambers

I understand. I subscribed to the email.

Interesting chapter...seems like there might be an anti-curse trying to draw them out of Elston as well.

I knew I made that job interview too perfect! (This is what happens when you start feeling guilty about screwing up your characters' lives so much. You start giving them perfect job interviews. I need to be meaner!)

There's no anti-curse.