Your left hand grip looks stronger in the posed photo
to me.The v pointed more at your right shoulder.
Also if the action photo was continued to impact, would your
hands be over your left leg like in the posed photo?
Pretty close i think. If not it's not off by much.
It looks like the y you want would be there at impact.
The club face looks like it is open a little bit at address.
It's hard to tell because you have a long shirt on but
in the action photo your left wrist might have broken
down or cuped a little instead of being bowed out a little or at least straight.
In any case you are very close to a first class profesional
looking impact position from all the photos i have seen
of pros in the same position. What say you Ham?
It would be nice to see a photo right at impact in short