Im actin like it wasn't sum'n I asked for
Fast forward years later, tunin the creator that pops passed on
That laggin form we hold on a platform, jus wantin to clap for'em
Lookin for support in a dap, but havin to adapt, tore'em
What up pop!
Holdin it down like a anchor!
Look at me now, I should thank ya
Aw, you don't like the sarcasm in my voice.....
Look at me wild, I should shank ya!
Where the fuck you been at!
middle was mostly Ok some nice lines but the finisher...
What you think, comes to pass
Thought it was cliche holdin to dreams, so I
Left click, an skid left an let free space hold my scenes
To free space for my means
So beefin, I have no time, its nothin
Jus a free face for my beams..........Disinigrate!!
I love plays on the same words like your "free space" "free space" lines... I mean, reusing rhymes and words and shit is usually garbage but if its done right it's nice.