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April 28 2012 at 12:48 AM
Kriza 
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Response to Cryptic universal abstract code

 

whats up grand. glad to see ur down to 2 posts a day. either u got a library of rhyme books or your on the writing tip like a job. Not hating if thats the case. Cause thats the only way to progress ur art. so props.

verse started out clean.

from every penstroke
I paint pictures wit ink
Black thoughts on white paper
so you know what I think
high as skies on sativa
like the head of the sphinx
im good luck like a rabbitz foot
cursin ya jinx

this line was beast.

aeronautical, neurological , nautical
blow ya mind clean like I was washin ya follicles
Psychiatric therapy, im so psycho -logical
I make epileptics pay attention n believe the impossible

way to be. hard syllables sick flow and meaning.
good shit man. keep it coming. just don't flood the dam.

 
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