The rough copy is almost finished (the lighter the lines, the rougher they are ^_^), but I'll let you decide if it's right. (As it turns out, I didn't need the info about the dragon ^^;, but I'll draw a back view anyway. Any excuse to draw a dragon, I say. ^_^)
http://starbit.freeservers.com/RJak1stRough.jpg
And just because I know it's hard to read, the text says, "R.Jak (P.O.A*)" and the little star goes to "Pending Owner's Approval :)". And also, because I know it's hard to see the face in that scanning:
http://starbit.freeservers.com/RJakHeadRough.jpg
And a couple of important things I'd forgotten to ask the first time ^^;, does he look too old or too young? And do the guns go over or under the duster?
And, uh, yeah, I think that's all. ^_^
And do you mind if I take this to e-mail now, because I was kinda hoping to, you know, let this thread die. ^^;