Geeze... if this were 1998 and I was writing lemon fanfiction, the result would probably be like that...
Still, it's a bit short, ain't it? Maybe by the time we get around to it, there would be more chapters?
Of course, that piece kind of pales in comparison to the awful, AWFUL, "Fall of the Thundercats" lemon that accompanied it. It's like the author decided to just use every perverted/rape lemon cliche in existence...