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  • TO JULIE SMITH - My two cents
    • Jon Merrill (no login)
      Posted May 11, 2008 2:42 AM

      Hi Julie,

      My computer was in the shop for a week and I am now just getting caught up on the Forum.

      "If you or your child is currently in the 4th Grade, and going into the 5th Grade this fall (2008-9 school year), then you are eligible to audition for a spot in the new class."

      The sentence is very poorly written by someone of extremely limited writing skills. I would have done it this way:

      "If you are currently in the 4th Grade and going into the 5th Grade this fall (2008-9 school year), then you are eligible to audition for a spot in the new class." The child does the auditioning, not the parent, and it is assumed that the parent will bring the child to the audition anyway.

      Jon Merrill

      "DOG FOR SALE - Will eat anything and especially fond of children."
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