poem. I liked the ideas in it. One suggestion is that I would break the lines down a bit so they have more impact. I liked the idea of:
Theonly action I can take is
to pray for a little quiet time
so I can close my eyes and see your face;
hear your voice; feel your touch.
In my dreams I tell you all my dream
and all my fears.
In them I don't have to purposefully place myself
in your path just so I can feel your presence
because you are already mine.
mmmm nice
keep posting please
Triston