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Shadow

November 28 2000 at 7:19 PM
 

 
As you sit bronzed
by the candle's tender flame
I ask you to remember.
Let my shadow rise
through the oaken boards of your wall.

Let its silence burnish the grain
with secrets spoken
once on a tongue liquered in French.

Let its grace lean into the sway
of a white curtain falling
off the wind's shoulder
like the dress of a Jamaican dancer.

A soft rhythm
we felt, inhaled
as our bodies lay cool
on textiles of moonlight
composing sleep.


 
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jmn@mint.net

November 29 2000, 7:45 AM 

LOVE that last stanza! Ooo, how divine...very, very nice!

 
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Oh My!!

November 29 2000, 6:31 PM 

This is yummy!!

 
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wow

December 1 2000, 8:05 PM 

very nice and sensual!

 
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DING!

December 15 2000, 1:37 PM 

WOo hoo...this one was...h-o-t

more please?

sigh....I loved the line
liquored in french.....doh...wish I would have come
up with it...

Triston

 
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