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ShadowNovember 28 2000 at 7:19 PM |
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| As you sit bronzed
by the candle's tender flame
I ask you to remember.
Let my shadow rise
through the oaken boards of your wall.
Let its silence burnish the grain
with secrets spoken
once on a tongue liquered in French.
Let its grace lean into the sway
of a white curtain falling
off the wind's shoulder
like the dress of a Jamaican dancer.
A soft rhythm
we felt, inhaled
as our bodies lay cool
on textiles of moonlight
composing sleep.
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| jmn@mint.net | November 29 2000, 7:45 AM |
LOVE that last stanza! Ooo, how divine...very, very nice! |
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| Oh My!! | November 29 2000, 6:31 PM |
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| wow | December 1 2000, 8:05 PM |
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| DING! | December 15 2000, 1:37 PM |
WOo hoo...this one was...h-o-t
more please?
sigh....I loved the line
liquored in french.....doh...wish I would have come
up with it...
Triston | |
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