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I watch

August 22 2001 at 11:35 PM
 

 
I WATCH
It's so hard to stand bye
Watching you love someone else
Wondering what you say to her
Wondering if you think of me

My heart shattering into a thousand pieces
As you kiss her good night
Watching as you change your mind
Go inside, turn of the light

All those looks you bestow on her
All those smiles you give to her
I wish a fraction of them had been mine
I would have cherished them through time

I see you embrace her
With your arms open wide
You warm her with your love
I shiver in the cold
Lonely on the outside

She is your joy and your pride
Your friend, your ove,.....your bride
I have been hurting for so long
My pain seems to be my friend
I watch you, watch her
Surely, someday my heart will mend

 
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Moonchild

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August 23 2001, 11:35 AM 

sad and well said. Good expression and I like the hope of the last line. Well done!

 
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August 23 2001, 3:19 PM 

what can i say? thanks, i guess, it was written about an unrequited childhood crush. have managed to forget him now, well......almost!!!

 
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