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interesting poem, do you remember this Pat Benatar song?
love is a battlefield
We are young
Heartache to heartache we stand
No promises, no demands
Love is a battlefield
We are strong, no one can tell us we're wrong
Searchin' our hearts for so long
Both of us knowing
Love is a battlefield
You're beggin' me to go then makin' me stay
Why do you hurt me so bad
It would help me to know
Do I stand in your way, or am I the best thing you've had
Believe me, believe me, I can't tell you why
But I'm trapped by your love and I'm chained to your side
We are young
Heartache to heartache we stand
No promises, no demands
Love is a battlefield
We are strong, no one can tell us we're wrong
Searchin' our hearts for so long
Both of us knowing
Love is a battlefield
We're losing control
Will you turn me away or touch me deep inside
And before this gets old, will it still feel the same
There's no way this will die
But if we get much closer, I could lose control
And if your heart surrenders, you'll need me to hold
We are young
Heartache to heartache we stand
No promises, no demands
Love is a battlefield
We are strong, no one can tell us we're wrong
Searchin' our hearts for so long
Both of us knowing
Love is a battlefield
We are young
Heartache to heartache we stand
No promises, no demands
Love is a battlefield
We are strong, no one can tell us we're wrong
Searchin' our hearts for so long
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Mt Obvious (Login Dr.Ink) BW Member 99.246.245.221
I did a rewrite because I am a pig / I am a pig with time on my sleeves.... (snort-snort)
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June 5 2012, 2:23 AM
As you enter this field You must be armed to the teeth
With a threat of harm bristling loud with envious charm
Like God or Mars unsheathing his sword
We enter inhumane/dreamsque to win!
Have sword and spear - muster furious grin
And beggar grab with fang hoof or claw
(although these animal tools are an insane denial of the
limited humanity which limits yet transcends us)
The sharpest dagger shrieked with blood that war like loves
are dangerous with flames of both glory and pain
Desert Dawg - Nevada Kerr
Thanks for you play field
LOVE IS A BATTLE-FIELD
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