Subtle and tired == Aha

by Bruce

Too subtle for my nuked brain tonight, missed the corners.

After that, the flow still feels off to me. The fireman seems to have calmed down completely from the initial shock if that was a flashback by the time he answers Cara's question about knowing Doc. Maybe I'm still too tired.

Posted on Aug 2, 2017, 1:24 PM

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