Always nice to hear some feedback, and I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Things get a little muddled at times, as I'm not working from any kind of script other than occasionally having a general outcome in mind. (Such as when Pirta first plays ball, when I went into that, the only plan I had in mind was that at some point she'd get to shoot Doc. Everything else, from the cellphone thing to how the last game worked out was done on the fly, one day at a time.)
