I already finished this story,and as vain as it may sound,I think it's pretty good:) I think the sequel is turning out to be really good though
Any way.Back to the story.The them is confusing to anyone first reading it,because the theme just pops up out of nowhere as you're reading.It is 25 computer pages long(like how long 1 website page is)It is called King of the Negaverse.Now.
Why is it confusing?I'll tell you why:
At the beginning of the story,all the Negaversians leave the Negaverse to teach Negaduck a lesson.Negaduck tricks the Fearsome Four into going to the Negaverse and he makes the portal disappear with a switch.Now,you think "Negaduck is the villain." No.You are wrong.Anyway.Negaduck makes a ray gun and he forces the Fearsome Four to get him the srystal with eyes on it like in "Jail Bird".It is not broken because they're in the Negaverse;everything's the opposite.He gets that crystal,and...bal bla bla...gets DNA...la la...OK.And then he makes his own Mega-Negaduck,because he knows that everyone would know how to stop him already but if he had a Mega-Negaduck on his side then they'd be "unstopable".So,...ok ill just say the real theme now.
It's about Negaduck and Mega-Negaduck fighting over the Negaverse.
And,no,it's not like some Disney movies,where there's always ALWAYS some couragious knight,or something that can beat the villain with ease.No.Negaduck almost dies,I'll tell you that.But Negaduck and Mega-Negaduck fight at the end.
There's also a sequel called King of the Negaverse II:Return of the Immortal Monster.On this,Mega-Negaduck..ooh yeah.I gotta tell you how they beat him on the 1st one,don't I?No...I'll just skip this part in it....Anyway.Mega-Negaduck comes back.On this story,theres a lot of characters I made up.Back to the story.Oh.And on the story it's the year 2301(don't ask.Read King of the Negaverse and you'll understand),and Negaduck realizes that Mega-Negaduck will return.Mega-Negaduck has a stone called the "Stone of Eternity",and...I don't want to give it away.Any way,He wants his revenge on Negaduck,and he has an evil plan to do so:
He wants to make super-clones of all Negaduck's friends and kill the originals,and then after a while,order the super-clones to kill him.Sigh...ok i'm gonna summarize for now on...
he makes a super-clone of jeffrey,a toon i made up(I also made up his super-clone,Super-clone Jeffrey,and I made up Stevie,and I made up M.E.,and Galio,too),with the stone.They try to find him so they can kill him.Finally,they catch him,but he escapes,taking the stone with him.they catch him again...la la...Umm...Can you read the rest by yourself?Thanks
Posted on Apr 28, 2002, 12:43 AM from IP address 198.81.16.21
